On May 19, I read the first chapter of my upcoming book, Pickleball Problems, at the San Diego Writers and Editors Guild’s open mic night. Honestly, I wasn’t sure if I should read an excerpt because the audience was a group of adults, and the target demographic for my book is children ages 9 – 12. But I decided to read the excerpt anyway because:
- it made for good practice
- someone in the audience may express interest in pre-ordering the book for a kiddo they love (which did happen!)
- I received valuable, positive feedback
Audience members anonymously wrote down comments about each author’s reading on index cards, and I was thrilled with the feedback I received. Here are some of the notes.
“Excellent opening and use of active voice. Story compelling, page turner. Also, you read well.”
“Very engaging. Good lesson for kids.”
“Great description of the relationship between the sisters.”
“Well presented. Characters are well developed. We want to know more and follow the characters. Sister love!”
“I liked the way the story of a young girl’s opinion of sports evolved with her sister’s input and further investigation of the sports camp.”
“Kids sports can be intimidating for non-athletic kids; great way to acknowledge this.”
Thank you to the San Diego Writers and Editors Guild members for sharing your thoughts–and to the other authors for sharing excerpts from their works. Moments like what I experienced at the open mic night are truly inspiring.
Nico Waters 